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Dark Clouds Ahead

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Bad days to come
And there is nowhere to go
I will be stairing at the sun
In the days I will never know.

Don't be fooled by these quiet times
It is the noise of a dying heart
A storm is coming soon
Be sure I will play my part

Bad days to come
Dark clouds ahead
Soon I'll stop loving you
Soon I will be dead.



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10 seconds exposure.
Tel Aviv beach, Israel
Image size
551x800px 223.82 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D70
Shutter Speed
100/10 second
Aperture
F/25.0
Focal Length
25 mm
Date Taken
Jun 8, 2004, 8:05:26 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This artwork is inspirational. I can imagine so many things by just looking at it. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

Your writing is excellent and the artwork goes well with it.

Love the mysterious effect of this piece. Though the title says dark clouds ahead, that's not the vibe I'm getting, more like opportunities ahead (if I did not read the poem).

And talking about clouds, that's the element I don't like in this piece. Too dark maybe? It's very distracting. Another thing that can be improved on is the cropping, maybe less of the rocks at the bottom to give a more balanced composition.