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Driving away
Driving from you
My heart is numb
The sky is crying
Thinking of what you said
Promises, promises
Nothing that can bring the sun

I don't like the city
It seems to reflect
What I feel about you
My teardrops taking over my sight
Gods' teardrops falling on my car
Not even you can stop
The rain from crashing on my soul


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Rainy day, 2 Frames.
First one - Focus on the city behind my car window, with the rain drops out of focus.
Second one - Focus on the rain drops on the window, with the city out of focus.
Tel Aviv, Israel.

The difference between the two is a metaphore of the emotional state the "hero" of the short poem, is in.
It's "simple", but I find it effective to compliment the words and the Idea.
I hope you feel this.
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:iconfourthdayofgrace:
~fourthdayofgrace Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
if your cross your eyes just right and focus your eyes just right... this makes a really cool 3D picture!
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:iconfactories:
Makes for an interesting stereograph!
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:iconphotomel:
creative..
beautiful 2 phtoos.
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:iconkaydee26:
Very cool. This has to be one of my favorite pictures.
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:icongilad:
Thank you
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:icontrancekopf:
You're an aspiration for all mankind
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:iconferdicildiz:
~FerdiCildiz Nov 27, 2006  Professional Interface Designer
I love the poetry:)
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:iconfreekdom:
cool idea..
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:icondagas:
Briliant idea! ;)

:+fav:
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