Driving from you
My heart is numb
The sky is crying
Thinking of what you said
Nothing that can bring the sun
I don't like the city
It seems to reflect
What I feel about you
My teardrops taking over my sight
Gods' teardrops falling on my car
Not even you can stop
The rain from crashing on my soul
Rainy day, 2 Frames.
First one - Focus on the city behind my car window, with the rain drops out of focus.
Second one - Focus on the rain drops on the window, with the city out of focus.
Tel Aviv, Israel.
The difference between the two is a metaphore of the emotional state the "hero" of the short poem, is in.
It's "simple", but I find it effective to compliment the words and the Idea.
I hope you feel this.