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Fading away by gilad Fading away by gilad


The smell burnt into the pillow
The shirt I bought you from London
The note I wrote you on your birthday
The book I thought you would like
I was wrong

The picture of us stanched in the album
The toothbrush left near the sink
The ice cream with the flavor only I liked
The Billy Joel tickets I thought you would like
I was wrong

The movie we left in the middle
The song I sang you in that restaurant
The one joke that made you laugh every time
That marriage proposal I though you would like
I was wrong

The memory of us washed with the waves
The small meaningless love moment lost in time
The one thing we had we thought would never be lost
I thought you wouldn't let me fade away
I was wrong


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Nothing much to add to the poem.
I hope "see it my way".
G
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:iconkapala01:
kapala01 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist
Really nice; I love the choice of focus :)
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miodek-pitny Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
I shared your work on Tumblr sztormcia.tumblr.com/post/5577...
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nunorcsousa1 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Hello gilad,

My name is Nuno Sousa, I'm Portuguese, an art lover and author of a poetry book written in Portuguese. I own a personal web page where I put some of my work. I felt in love with one of your photos named 'Fading away'. I'm kindly asking if you could grant me permission to use this photo in my page (and exclusivelly for this purpose). I thank you in advance.

Link: [link]

My best regards and keep the excelent work,

Nuno
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Dipiie Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey you! *points* Yeah you.
You have been featured! :dummy:
[link]
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:iconmanual-shoot:
manual-shoot Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
Where did you idea for your work?
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:iconaripi:
aripi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
featured here [link]
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:iconbaher-amin:
Baher-Amin Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice capture.... this is a great angle... well done.
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:iconlflorenzano:
lflorenzano Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
This is sooo beautiful
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:iconklaic:
klaic Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
I like the relationship between the tones of photos, excellent compositions.
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:iconchels1016:
chels1016 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010
I absolutely love this picture! And I wanted to let you know that I used it in one of my blogs. I gave credit to you and also linked to your DeviantArt profile. If you would like a link to the blog so you can see for yourself, I can provide you with that. I just wanted you to be aware and it you would like, I can remove the picture.

Also, I just wanted to add again that I really LOVE this picture and the poem as well. Both are amazing!!
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FearaJinx Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
awesome!!!!
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Bonjous Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
Very dramatic... :heart:
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yannldotcom Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
Hello
I'd like to use your wonderful picture to illustrate some poetic work on my personal website (in french).
Would it be ok for you ?
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Photographer-97 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009   Photographer
hi there!
your artwork has been featured here [link] :)
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tootyy Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009
:h:
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tootyy Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009
sorry, I meant :heart: =D
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anthropomastoras Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009
Cheers,

I am Emanuel and I am also a Deviant art member that only a few months ago i decided to start share my art with others in the W.W.W. I usually use words to give images more importance, thing that i hardly manage to do with my photos ... but for a strange way is more easy with others' art. So .. this time after a small search, a typical for me work, i found this photo of yours and suddenly i had a small strike of inspiration to write something about that. For sure, as i beleive, the world, our world will be more important and interesting if we could share things and thoughts with others, for that reason i used your photo in my personal blog adding a small melody of a small music box that i believe that can give also soul to your photo too and translated for you in english, [link] , to give a literature soul to the colours ... Forgive my action but if you do not want me to use it, you have every right to advice me to remove it. I am going also to share the things i wrote for it with you too here. Hope that will be enough touchy to worth the imensity of feelings i felt after seeing it some hours ago and for expressing to you my compliments about your art.

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I still think of you
and I cannot sleep
and I don't talk
All the hours that pass by
ask me how much I love you

I met many women, but what to say?
you are the light in the shadows

I still think of you
I am sorry you left
and I get depressed
God, if only
on the empty pillow
I could dream of you

I met many women,
but you are the only one
I will love for as long I shall live




Greetings from Ferrara-Italy.

Emanuel ...

--
The first time that I love you, the first time that I know you, the first time in your arms I am born and I die.
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coulombic Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2009   Photographer
Stunning. Emotionally evocative. Absolutely perfect.
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ujin765 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009
Hey Gilad! I am creating a small photography course for some people here. Would you mind if I use some of your pictures as examples for different effects? Such as Depth of focus using the picture above?

I think it would be very helpful for people to learn from examples of a great photographer!!
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DreamEyce Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Professional Photographer
Amazing photo, and hard-hitting at this sad point in my life. Great work!
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Jaredtazeriffe Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
<3
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mattjamesss Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I have featured this lovely deviation in my journal :) [link]
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erene Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
Amazing concept and an excellent execution!
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fcarmo-photography Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
You have been Featured here: [link]

:)
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Energy-Of-Light Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Professional Photographer
You've got such an amazing eye for a picture, beautiful poem and photograph. The two made me stop, think and feel emotion and I believe that's what makes an amazing picture. Beautiful! :)
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fineart-photography Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Hello there.

I'm Thomas from :iconfineart-photography: fineart-photography club. I think this photograph is really awsome. Can I add it to our collection ?

=kazakchoc
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gilad Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Photographer
Sure :)
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fineart-photography Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
Your work has been featured
Thanks a lot.

:wave:

=kazakchoc
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selimselimoglu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009   Photographer
very nice...
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photorific Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
very peaceful :)
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:iconconitaz:
Conitaz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
Very touching, both photo and poem. Sad but yet great concept! :)
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cetrobo Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009
Hi, your nice work featured here : [link]
Good day !
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c05t1n Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
This is an absolutely stunning shot!
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alelale Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008  Student Interface Designer
that's a beautiful poem and nicely complemeted with the photograph.
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gladiator656 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
consider me one of ur fans :)

amazing pic
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Vreeze Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008  Professional Photographer
such a simple but amazing picture..
great work
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KhalllodY Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2008  Professional Photographer
Featured [link]
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shadowless911 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008
Great one.
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ArekZ Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008   Photographer
i featured your great work here: [link]

have a nice weekend :hug: and thanks a lot for this impression
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enfoire123 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing and beautiful. Well done. : )
Amour :heart:
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bryxta Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2008   Writer
I like the person fading away, it gives me a twist in my heart. Great photo.
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meskafonas Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
amazing!
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PatrickRen1 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
Great photo. Awesome concept.
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Flowerinka Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
Featured in the NEWS "In Your Dreams" > [link] :blowkiss:
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Doedit Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008
[link] featured you here. :D
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lenagnl Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
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lunarstorm Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008
woow
incredible beautiful shot
great work, amazing :D
:clap:
:wow:
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Aeoliane Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Simply wonderful.
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