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Deviousness `TimberClipse's dedication to our community is without question. From developing helpful tutorials, to being a community leader in groups such as #fella and #deviant365, you can always find Zev connecting with all areas of our community in order to spread his infectious enthusiasm and inspiring positivity. We are delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2012 to `TimberClipse, congratulations! Read More
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Your writing is excellent and the artwork goes well with it.
Love the mysterious effect of this piece. Though the title says dark clouds ahead, that's not the vibe I'm getting, more like opportunities ahead (if I did not read the poem).
And talking about clouds, that's the element I don't like in this piece. Too dark maybe? It's very distracting. Another thing that can be improved on is the cropping, maybe less of the rocks at the bottom to give a more balanced composition.
This photo “for me” has some good and bad thinks.
In the bad thinks I found the stone to take up nearly the 50% of the photo, and although the texture is incredible defined the stone don't say nothing, I cut the photo down to the stone radius and center a bit more the stone in the frame.
The sky is so unreal, is like a negative of a sky, I don't know if the conversion to b&w create these black clouds, but I don't like it.
In the other hand the photo transmit peace and a sense of unease at the same time.
This photo spur to follow on these blur columns to the infinite, but when you arrive at the end you found the dark, "Bad days to come".
Your words to comments on are much appreciated and emphasize the photo.
Good work.Note: If you like my critique, please do the same with one of my photos
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Primero para criticar tu trabajo es necesario ver tu obra antes y admirar la calidad de la misma.
Esta foto “
En la parte negativa encuentro que la roca ocupa mas del 50% de la foto, y aunque la textura de la misma está increíblemente bien definida a mi no me dice nada, yo cortaría la foto por abajo hasta tocar casi con el radio de la roca además de centrarla un poco más.
El cielo es irreal, parece como si lo hubieras negativizado, no se si ha sido la conversión al b&n lo que a creado esas nubes negras, pero no me gustan.
Por otro lado la foto transmite paz e intranquilidad al mismo tiempo.
La foto te empuja a seguir las columnas metidas en la niebla hasta el infinito, pero cuando llegas al final encuentras la oscuridad, “Días malos por venir”.
Buen trabajo.
Nota: Si te ha gustado mi comentario, por favor comenta una de mis fotos
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