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Artist's CommentsBad days to come And there is nowhere to go I will be stairing at the sun In the days I will never know. Don't be fooled by these quiet times It is the noise of a dying heart A storm is coming soon Be sure I will play my part Bad days to come Dark clouds ahead Soon I'll stop loving you Soon I will be dead. **** 10 seconds exposure. Tel Aviv beach, Israel CommentsThis is incredible. It makes you feel like the remnants of the dock are floating in the sky.
-- "What's wrong with a man wantin' another man to touch his beads?" Robert Downey, Jr. Hungry? Love it! The mood is so calming and quiet, and the black and white suits the picture perfectly. Great work as always Gilad!
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Your writing is excellent and the artwork goes well with it.
Love the mysterious effect of this piece. Though the title says dark clouds ahead, that's not the vibe I'm getting, more like opportunities ahead (if I did not read the poem).
And talking about clouds, that's the element I don't like in this piece. Too dark maybe? It's very distracting. Another thing that can be improved on is the cropping, maybe less of the rocks at the bottom to give a more balanced composition.
This photo “for me” has some good and bad thinks.
In the bad thinks I found the stone to take up nearly the 50% of the photo, and although the texture is incredible defined the stone don't say nothing, I cut the photo down to the stone radius and center a bit more the stone in the frame.
The sky is so unreal, is like a negative of a sky, I don't know if the conversion to b&w create these black clouds, but I don't like it.
In the other hand the photo transmit peace and a sense of unease at the same time.
This photo spur to follow on these blur columns to the infinite, but when you arrive at the end you found the dark, "Bad days to come".
Your words to comments on are much appreciated and emphasize the photo.
Good work.Note: If you like my critique, please do the same with one of my photos
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Primero para criticar tu trabajo es necesario ver tu obra antes y admirar la calidad de la misma.
Esta foto “
En la parte negativa encuentro que la roca ocupa mas del 50% de la foto, y aunque la textura de la misma está increíblemente bien definida a mi no me dice nada, yo cortaría la foto por abajo hasta tocar casi con el radio de la roca además de centrarla un poco más.
El cielo es irreal, parece como si lo hubieras negativizado, no se si ha sido la conversión al b&n lo que a creado esas nubes negras, pero no me gustan.
Por otro lado la foto transmite paz e intranquilidad al mismo tiempo.
La foto te empuja a seguir las columnas metidas en la niebla hasta el infinito, pero cuando llegas al final encuentras la oscuridad, “Días malos por venir”.
Buen trabajo.
Nota: Si te ha gustado mi comentario, por favor comenta una de mis fotos
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